Monday 5 September 2016

The Cross Country

The Cross Country


We all huddled at start line.
Get set.
GO!!!


We RUSH RUSH RUSH, round the first corner.
Tom takes the lead.
Stitch welling.
Throat clogging.
Water splashing.


Second lap starting.
Passing people.
Water splashing again.
Run walk run walk.
Finish line in sight.
RUN RUN RUN AND PASTED


Waiting in line
Wondering where I came
Tokens being given out.
Few left.

2 comments:

  1. Great effort Nathan, I really like how you have used the language features from the poem in class.

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  2. Great effort Nathan, I really like how you have used the language features from the poem in class.

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